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  1. Julie B
    April 4, 2017

    This is so poorly written, I’m not sure what the heck I just read. Clean this up and have it make sense. Start with the first sentence: Too many ideas trying to punch out of the bag. Talk about one thing at a time and compare it directly to the the next object. Don’t start a sentence with “When”.

    Read paragraph 3, what happens to particles? Do they turn into antigens if unhindered? Do I need to know a hinderance? “So the . . .” Bad conclusion description after the previous explaination! Gees people.

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    • Susan BERNSTEIN
      September 26, 2017

      I agree. Sentence sequence is terrible. In this account, we cant distinguish between an antibody as the defender and the antigen as the ‘foreign invader.’
      I’m realizing that much of the material on the web is incoherent, self contradictory, and desperately in need of an editor.

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